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You’ve Tried It All. Here’s Why Nothing Has Worked—Until Now.
Tired of Cookie-Cutter Fitness Plans? Let’s Build One That Works for YOU.
Your Body, Your Goals—A Fitness Plan That Finally Fits YOUR Life.
Diets & Workouts Keep Failing You? This Changes Everything.
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Hey [First Name],
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PROBLEM: You’ve Tried Everything—But the Results Never Stick.
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You’ve followed the diets.
You’ve pushed through the workouts.
You’ve done everything the fitness industry tells you to do.
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But despite all the effort…
The weight keeps coming back.
The workouts feel exhausting, not empowering.
You’re stuck in a cycle of starting, stopping, and second-guessing yourself.
And the worst part? You’re beginning to wonder if lasting change is even possible for you.
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AGITATE: You’ve Been Given the Wrong Approach.
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The problem isn’t your willpower.
It’s not your metabolism.
It’s not that you “just need to try harder.”
The real problem? You’ve been following plans that weren’t built for YOU.
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The truth is:
One-size-fits-all fitness plans don’t work—because you’re not like everyone else.
Extreme diets set you up to fail—because they don’t fit your lifestyle.
Training harder doesn’t guarantee better results—training smarter does.
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That’s why nothing has stuck—until now.
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SOLUTION: Your Fitness Should Work for You—Not the Other Way Around.
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At Coach Ollie Fitness, we do things differently.
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Workouts Built for YOUR Body & Schedule – No templates, no random routines. Every session is designed to fit your goals, experience level, and available time.
Nutrition That Works in Real Life – No starvation, no complicated meal prep. Just simple, sustainable guidance that fits into YOUR daily routine.
24/7 Coaching & Accountability – Because fitness isn’t just about what you do in the gym—it’s about having the right support system that keeps you on track.
Real Progress, Not Quick Fixes – We’re here for long-term results, not temporary wins.
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And the best part?
This isn’t a fad, a crash diet, or a temporary fix. This is a system built around YOU—so you can finally see results that last.
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This Is Your Moment—Don’t Let It Pass You By.
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I only take on a limited number of clients to make sure every person gets the personalized coaching they deserve.
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Spots are filling fast—apply now to lock in your place.
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[Click here to apply before it’s too late → [Insert Link]]
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No more second-guessing. No more starting over.
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This time, it’s different.
This time, it’s built for YOU.
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Coach Ollie
Coach Ollie Fitness
Why This Version is Flawless & Will Convert More Clients
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Stronger Emotional Pull – It makes them feel their struggle before offering a solution.
Creates Tension & Urgency – The copy builds frustration, then provides relief with the program.
Feels Like a 1-on-1 Conversation – It reads like a personal message from a coach, not a generic promo.
Powerful CTA – It positions signing up as an exclusive opportunity, not a request.
No Fluff, Just Impact – Every sentence earns its place and moves them closer to action.
Final Answer: THIS is the email that gets sign-ups. It’s clear, persuasive, and impossible to ignore.